Strengths:
The colour scheme works really well with the grey background and the image. Love the contents title, it looks really good with the rest of the page. The way the headings are contrasting against a background looks really good as well.
Improvements: You could change the font of the main headings or something to make it look more realistic and maybe add another image. Also move where it says 'next queen of pop' you could move the pop along so its under the text and not the number.
Other Comments: Looks really good, could work to look more realistic but everything works well together.
Jessica Clark - feedback.
Strengths:
I like the way the colours work together to make each other stand out as this makes the information look bold. I also like the use of leading lines to draw the readers eyes around the page.
Improvements: The spelling of 'January' needs to be corrected on the date line. You could try using lowercase letters for the text that isn't the main headings so that the headings standout more.
Other Comments: I like the photograph and the quote. You could make the information on 'page 17' link with the photograph more because it looks like 2 stories
Niall Foot - Feedback
Strengths:
This is amazing, I really like the way you have done the 'Contents' It is really good. I also really like what you have you done with the image and the writing next to it looks perfect. The way the writing contrasts with the background is amazing and it looks really good.
Improvement:
Its all really good!
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